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recce19
05-12-2008, 10:48 AM
Working on a new sig for me. Tell me what you think :5baby:

After Joy's suggestion
http://www.theoldbreed.com/imagehosting/24482a979037268.gif

After Bear's, Jeff's and Jos's suggestions
http://www.theoldbreed.com/imagehosting/244829ea41c5338.gif

The original work
http://www.theoldbreed.com/imagehosting/244828657a7ecb3.gif

New remake on top :)
Necron99
05-12-2008, 10:54 AM
Looks nice, like the blending. I recognize the image as a diesel locamotive but not sure others would. Just an observation.
Fungus53
05-12-2008, 10:57 AM
Agree with Bear, might increase the pic size more, even blowing it up and out of the frame to show some more detail. Otherwise looks nice.
recce19
05-12-2008, 11:05 AM
OK thanks for some very constructive comments.

I knew I wasn't happy with it but wasn't sure why, so thought best to ask :)

Ta very much mateys

Neil
-RDX-ViViTroNL
05-12-2008, 11:17 AM
tip.

they are getting to small if you want to show the whole locomotive (you cann't hardly see how big and powerfull they are. Go for details !!!!
Remember it's the locomotive yuo wanna show and not the space around it

http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/9129/adiesellocomotivebythergb5.th.jpg (http://img391.imageshack.us/my.php?image=adiesellocomotivebythergb5.jpg)

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6792/engineno5771bycrazymonkuu8.th.jpg (http://img102.imageshack.us/my.php?image=engineno5771bycrazymonkuu8.jpg)
recce19
05-12-2008, 11:57 AM
Thanks Jos :)
Necron99
05-12-2008, 12:10 PM
OK thanks for some very constructive comments.

I knew I wasn't happy with it but wasn't sure why, so thought best to ask :)

Ta very much mateys

Neil

Glad to help out Recce! Look forward to seeing your finished product.
raydoger
05-12-2008, 02:21 PM
Looks Good
mixmaster
05-12-2008, 03:54 PM
Working on a new sig for me. Tell me what you think :5baby:

http://www.theoldbreed.com/imagehosting/244828657a7ecb3.gif

It's looking great so far! I could tell it was a locomotive, but the advice given is good.

Keep up the good work!
boss
05-12-2008, 05:49 PM
Very Nice Concept Neil , Looks Good So Far :)
recce19
05-13-2008, 02:24 PM
Updated :icon_wink:

Picture at top ^^
mixmaster
05-13-2008, 03:21 PM
looks quite a bit better!
ThorAltair
05-13-2008, 05:27 PM
new and improved one is better neil... good work mate....
boss
05-13-2008, 05:44 PM
Much Better :)

I Would Fade The Gray A Little More , Bring More Of The Yellow Strips Out
Necron99
05-13-2008, 09:59 PM
Definitely see the locomotive now. Great job!
FireBlade
05-14-2008, 12:41 AM
The top one looks loads better now.Nice work Rekk-ee :)
recce19
05-14-2008, 02:46 AM
OK following on from Joy's suggestion, I've done another (at the top).

I think this is as far as I'm going with this one. So the question now is which one ?

You decide :3some:
mixmaster
05-14-2008, 07:00 AM
OK following on from Joy's suggestion, I've done another (at the top).

I think this is as far as I'm going with this one. So the question now is which one ?

You decide :3some:

that one looks AMAZING! so much improvement from the first!
Necron99
05-14-2008, 07:37 AM
I think the latest one, stands out really well.
Fungus53
05-14-2008, 07:55 AM
New one looks great Neil.
FireBlade
05-14-2008, 11:57 AM
I'd go for Joy's suggestion
recce19
05-14-2008, 12:36 PM
OK Joy's the winner :)

Thanks again everyone :3some:
ThorAltair
05-14-2008, 03:53 PM
looks good neil... the final is definitely an improvement from the first... and joy's suggestion made quite a significant change... looks good mate...
boss
05-14-2008, 04:52 PM
Very Nice Neil , I Like It Alot :)
mixmaster
05-14-2008, 05:18 PM
'tis a sweet one!